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Icy Rain

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I see
Icy
Rain
Again
Freezing the street
Beneath my feet
a
a
b
b
a
a


This limerick of mine is one line longer than a standard limerick, but hey, it's close enough. And although the rhyming goes

a - homonym (I see)
a - homonym (Icy) ...ok, "I see" is two words, but whatever
b - rhyme (rAIN)
b - rhyme (agAIN)
a - rhyme (strEET)
a - rhyme (fEET),
the "ee" sound in the 1st two lines and the last two lines make it work as "aa,bb,aa".
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